When I am tired of the world
And it frustrates me through and through,
All that keeps me going ,
Are the great things about you!
They say women talk too much
And I won’t say they are wrong! ЁЯШЙ
But for me your voice is melody
And your speech, a song!
What brightens my day up,
Is your million-dollar smile,
To get one look at those pearly whites,
I will undertake a thousand exiles!
When I look into your mysterious eyes
And you look back into mine,
I feel strong and weak
Both at the same time!
However confused I may be
But when I am with you,
I know exactly the man I want to be
And I know what I want to do!
And that is why, the greatest thing about you
Is nothing else but only you!
And that is just one of the reasons, my dear,
Why I, truly, deeply, madly, love you!
– Pranjal Wagh
This work by Pranjal A. Wagh is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 2.5 India License
15 comments
Awesome lines …keep it up ..!!!
omg…. wonderful… is this ur gift to her on valentines day… i must say she is very lucky…
@Rohan Mohite
Thanks!
@Dipti
Thanks for the comment! I will gift this to her when I find her ЁЯШЫ
Mastach Pranjal ЁЯЩВ
Happy Valentines Day!!!
Gr8 man…ur gal will surely be impressed……
ЁЯЩВ good one
Woww! How wonderful she must be….really! She has inspired your thoughts to pen down such beautiful nd romantic words….Great dude..,.keep going….
Woww! How wonderful she must be…really! She inspired to pen down such beautiful nd romantic words…keep going…ALL THE BEST….
Finally!! the writer in you is back to what he does BEST.. great use of words (as usual) keep it up brother… u shall find her soon ЁЯШЙ
Marathi liv, like karnar navhto pan jastach awadli mhanun lihitoy ЁЯША
Naaiice.
@Harshad, Jaideep, Sharvari,Anup, Harshit,Indrajeet
Thanks a lot!!
@Vrushali Wagh
Thank you so much !! ЁЯЩВ
pranjal : nice poem… i feel the best feeling for a girl is to be valued.. and ur poem does just that… wish u d best in finding that ‘SPECIAL’ person… who inspires many more of such poems… ЁЯЩВ ЁЯЩВ
keep writing ЁЯЩВ
@Abha
Thank you….Tapaas chalu ahe madam.. ЁЯШЫ
One of the best thought process…well done !!!