The Greatest Thing About You

by Pranjal Wagh
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When I am tired of the world
And it frustrates me through and through,
All that keeps me going ,
Are the great things about you!

They say women talk too much
And I won’t say they are wrong! 😉
But for me your voice is melody
And your speech, a song!

What brightens my day up,
Is your million-dollar smile,
To get one look at those pearly whites,
I will undertake a thousand exiles!

When I look into your mysterious eyes
And you look back into mine,
I feel strong and weak
Both at the same time!

However confused I may be
But when I am with you,
I know exactly the man I want to be
And I know what I want to do!

And that is why, the greatest thing about you
Is nothing else but only you!
And that is just one of the reasons, my dear,
Why I, truly, deeply, madly, love you!

– Pranjal Wagh

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15 comments

Rohan Mohite February 14, 2012 - 6:25 PM

Awesome lines …keep it up ..!!!

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dipti February 14, 2012 - 6:40 PM

omg…. wonderful… is this ur gift to her on valentines day… i must say she is very lucky…

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Pranjal Wagh February 14, 2012 - 6:43 PM

@Rohan Mohite
Thanks!

@Dipti
Thanks for the comment! I will gift this to her when I find her 😛

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Harshad Barve February 14, 2012 - 7:09 PM

Mastach Pranjal 🙂

Happy Valentines Day!!!

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Jaideep Sowani February 14, 2012 - 7:16 PM

Gr8 man…ur gal will surely be impressed……

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Sharvari February 14, 2012 - 7:37 PM

🙂 good one

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Indrajeet February 14, 2012 - 8:28 PM

Woww! How wonderful she must be….really! She has inspired your thoughts to pen down such beautiful nd romantic words….Great dude..,.keep going….

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Indrajeet February 14, 2012 - 8:34 PM

Woww! How wonderful she must be…really! She inspired to pen down such beautiful nd romantic words…keep going…ALL THE BEST….

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Harshit Ralhan February 15, 2012 - 12:30 PM

Finally!! the writer in you is back to what he does BEST.. great use of words (as usual) keep it up brother… u shall find her soon 😉

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Anup February 15, 2012 - 12:56 PM

Marathi liv, like karnar navhto pan jastach awadli mhanun lihitoy 😀

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Vrushali February 15, 2012 - 2:09 PM

Naaiice.

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Pranjal Wagh February 15, 2012 - 2:13 PM

@Harshad, Jaideep, Sharvari,Anup, Harshit,Indrajeet
Thanks a lot!!

@Vrushali Wagh

Thank you so much !! 🙂

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abha deshkar February 15, 2012 - 11:31 PM

pranjal : nice poem… i feel the best feeling for a girl is to be valued.. and ur poem does just that… wish u d best in finding that ‘SPECIAL’ person… who inspires many more of such poems… 🙂 🙂
keep writing 🙂

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Pranjal Wagh February 16, 2012 - 10:53 AM

@Abha
Thank you….Tapaas chalu ahe madam.. 😛

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Onkar Oak April 19, 2013 - 12:04 AM

One of the best thought process…well done !!!

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